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The activities I've done have given me extra skills to be able to work. Particularly, when I participated as a member of the organizing committee of the departmental competition, it helped me enhance lots of crucial skills such as teamwork, organization, and communication skills. In addition, I participated in writing research papers with the guidance of lecturers that helped me improve my computer working skills, how to defend my thesis, analyze and lookup information selectively, help friends in the group searching for information to complete a scientific research paper. And I am also ecstatic that I had a small scientific research paper published in a ministerial scientific conference thanks to the guidance of my adorable lecturer. My plan in the next 5 years is to improve my expertise and obtain Certified Public Accountants (CPA), learn a foreign language like Japanese, continue to study ACCA.
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I participated as a member of the organizing committee of the departmental competition, it
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helped
me enhance lots of crucial
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skills
such as teamwork, organization, and communication
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skills
.
In addition
, I participated in writing research papers with the guidance of lecturers that
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helped
me
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improve
my computer working
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skills
, how to defend my thesis, analyze and lookup information
selectively
,
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help
friends in the group searching for information to complete a scientific research paper. And I am
also
ecstatic that I had a
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small
scientific research paper published in a ministerial scientific conference thanks to the guidance of my adorable lecturer. My plan in the
next
5 years is to
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improve
my expertise and obtain Certified Public Accountants (CPA), learn a foreign language like Japanese, continue to study
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IELTS essay The activities I've done have given me extra skills to be able to work. Particularly, when

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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