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explain the four rules in class

explain the four rules in class AP8q1
First of all, be respectful by listening to the teacher and others while they’re talking; during class time, don’t use the phone or other devices (except the laptop). Second, be responsible by being on time and being prepared (bring materials, complete class works). The next rule is giving effort by participating in-class activities and having an open mind. The last rule is having fun by fulfilling all the rules above.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, be respectful by listening to the teacher
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and others
while they’re talking; during
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class
time, don’t
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use
the phone or other devices (except the laptop). Second, be responsible by being on time and
being prepared
(bring materials, complete
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class
works). The
next
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rule
is giving effort by participating in-
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class
activities and having an open mind. The last
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rule
is having fun by fulfilling all the
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rules
above.

IELTS essay explain the four rules in class

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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