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I prefer to travel........

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I used to travel a lot with my family. My family love travelling except my father. We used to drive to many places when I was a child. However, as he gets older, he prefers to stay at home to look after our cat. Therefore, I have recently travelled with my mother more often while my father watches TV at home. I think it is not so difficult to convince my father to come with us, but I am sure that he will sleep and stay in the hotel most of the day. As a result, my mother and I will be just going out to explore during a trip. I feel this is a waste of money if he does not enjoy going out. Furthermore, it is not good fun for us if we cannot share experience all together. It is the best way for only my mother and I to go out for a trip and to look for local food or presents for my father who stays at home. We can talk about our trip to my father when we get home. He also enjoys food.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to travel a lot with my family. My family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 travelling except my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to drive to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 places when I was a child. However
, as he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 older, he prefers to stay at home to look after our cat. Therefore
, I have recently travelled with my mother more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 while my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
watches
 TV at home.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 difficult to convince my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with us, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I am sure that he will sleep and stay in the hotel most of the day. As a result
, my mother and I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 going out to explore during a trip. I feel this is a waste of money if he does not enjoy going out. Furthermore
, it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 fun for us if we cannot share experience all together.

It is the best way for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 my mother and I to go out for a trip and to look for local food or presents for my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 who stays at home. We can talk about our trip to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdadpredecessorancestorparent
father
 when we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 home. He also
 enjoys food. 