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Some people think big companies are damaging the environment. Others believe that the public are also to blame. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think big companies are damaging the environment. Others believe that the public are also to blame. o8rKB
The world has never stopped evolving since the beginning of time, civilization, therefore, is tied up in a never-ending hectic life. We rarely care about waste treatments and the consequences of dumping waste uncontrollably and irresponsibly, which is to blame for the excessive number of dumpsters we have left behind. I believe that the public should widely know sustainable consumption habits of promoting a healthier lifestyle and maintain ecological balance. In the proliferation of industrialization, big companies and manufacturers trigger a toxic habit in their consumers’ daily life. They manipulate and promote their products so successfully that buyers continuously buy their products time after time without realizing this action might damage the environment indirectly, but hazardously. To illustrate, exhaust fumes and plastic packages resulting in the process cause air pollution as well as tons of microplastic floating in the ocean. There is a desperate need for change to heal the wound of our ecological system and build up a brighter future. Several feasible solutions are using organic products, supporting local businesses, and avoiding plastic wraps. The responsibility does not belong solely to the producers, consumers also need to redefine their neglect towards protecting the environment. The majority bears in mind the assumption that small actions barely exert negative effects as all they have ever done is littering a candy wrap or a nylon bag on the sidewalk or in the forest. Obviously, there has been a huge mistake since any actions, despite being intentional or coincidental, have every chance to cause chaos or imbalance in nature. We are urged to take action any time possible by taking steps in recycling, cooperating with like-minded influencers, authorized members, and organizations in new campaigns and events. All in all, it is required to have an active attitude and the right mindset to improve contemporary environment-related issues. A sustainable consumption habit is undeniably contributing massive changes to the ecological balance, ensuring a sustainable lifestyle.
The world has never
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stopped
evolving since the beginning of
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time
, civilization,
therefore
,
is tied
up in a never-ending hectic life. We rarely care about waste treatments and the consequences of dumping waste
uncontrollably
and
irresponsibly
, which is to blame for the excessive number of dumpsters we have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
behind. I believe that the public should
widely
know sustainable consumption habits of promoting a healthier lifestyle and maintain ecological balance.

In the proliferation of industrialization,
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big
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companies
and manufacturers trigger a toxic habit in their consumers’ daily life. They manipulate and promote their products
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so
successfully
that buyers
continuously
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buy
their products
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time
after
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time
without realizing this
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action
might damage the environment
indirectly
,
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but
hazardously
. To illustrate, exhaust fumes and plastic packages resulting in the process cause air pollution
as well
as tons of microplastic floating in the ocean. There is a desperate need for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
to heal the wound of our ecological system and build up a brighter future. Several feasible solutions are using organic products, supporting local businesses, and avoiding plastic wraps.

The responsibility does not belong
solely
to the producers, consumers
also
need to redefine their neglect towards protecting the environment. The majority bears in mind the assumption that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
actions
barely
exert
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negative
effects as all they have ever done is littering a candy wrap or a nylon bag on the sidewalk or in the forest.
Obviously
, there has been a huge mistake since any actions, despite being intentional or coincidental, have every chance to cause chaos or imbalance in nature. We
are urged
to take
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action
any
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time
possible by taking steps in recycling, cooperating with like-minded influencers, authorized members, and organizations in new campaigns and
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events
.

All in all, it
is required
to have an active attitude and the right mindset to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
contemporary environment-related issues. A sustainable consumption habit is
undeniably
contributing massive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
to the ecological balance, ensuring a sustainable lifestyle.
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IELTS essay Some people think big companies are damaging the environment. Others believe that the public are also to blame.

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