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the actions paramedics should take when responding to a roadside accident.

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There are four steps for the action paramedics should take when responding to a roadside accident. The first step, When arrive at accident site should paramedics park at a safe place before they ensure everyone's safety. Second step, Assess the situation. as the paramedic look for casualties first, they give more attention to those unresponsive. The thierd step, Handle seriously injured carefully. whenever they stop bleeding first, we save the patient from thrombosis. The paramedic check for breathing and check for a pulse. If he no breathing and no pulse, they must use CPR. The fourth step, the paramedic move the patient seriously injured to hospital after they secure neck and spine by use collar. The paramedic should move patients carefully by use stretcher then they take most seriously injured to hospital first. If you follow these steps, you can save a lot of patients.
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IELTS essay the actions paramedics should take when responding to a roadside accident.

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