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The Sa Dec city's flower festival

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The Sa Dec city's flower festival is on the point of holding on 1st January. Therefore, a huge of travel is due to come to the center of the flower fair on Sunday. For this celebration, my parents and I are to be there from the dust to carry a variety of marigold pots for sele here. My father said/ said that: "We are not to be late. Because these flowers can blossom too soon when not be brought it into the greenhouse for adjusting in suitable temperature "
The
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Sa
Dec city's flower festival is on the point of holding on 1st January.
Therefore
,
The phrase 'a huge of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'a' and 'of'.
a huge of
travel is due to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the center of the flower
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
on Sunday. For this celebration, my parents and I are to be there from the dust to carry a variety of marigold pots for
Possible spelling mistake found.
sele
here. My father said/ said that:
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
We are not to be late.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
these flowers can blossom too
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
when not
be brought
it into the greenhouse for adjusting in suitable temperature
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
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IELTS essay The Sa Dec city's flower festival

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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