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Do you agree or disagree that computers will replace teachers one day?

that computers will replace teachers one day? pLd19
I strongly disagree with this point. Computers may be a helpful gadget in many aspects but it can not take place the school teacher. Teachers play an irreplaceable role in teaching and the way they impart knowledge to students is something that computers can never do. Computers only bring information, if we want to understand the lessons throughout, a teacher is what we need. Furthermore, if computers replace teachers in the future, it will increase the risk of unemployment
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disagree with this point. Computers may be a helpful gadget in
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aspects
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it can not take place the school
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play an irreplaceable role in teaching and the way they impart knowledge to students is something that computers can never do. Computers
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only
bring information, if we want to understand the lessons throughout, a
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teacher
is what we need.
Furthermore
, if computers replace
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teachers
in the future, it will increase the
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risk
of unemployment
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IELTS essay that computers will replace teachers one day?

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1 paragraphs
78 words
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