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Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much point? I am going to analyze that thought.

that celebrities are paid far too much point? I am going to analyze that thought. RR50Y

I accede that. Because teachers, nurses and many other professions work more than actors. Then, singers don't have very responsibility affair. Celebrities are often born with their talent for singing or acting. They have not spent many years at university like doctors and engineers. But they to take less money than fame people. Celebrities spend a lot of money on unnecessary things. For example, most of them waste their money on expensive houses, cars and parties. I disagree with this opinion. Celebrities don't have a private life. They can't live freely. They can't walk the streets as well as ordinary people. Creating one music or film are difficult. And singers, actors are work hard. Many celebrities donate their money. Helps sick people. They spend their money in the right way. And fame people have more problems than normal people. It makes stress.

I accede that. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 teachers, nurses and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other professions work more than actors. Then, singers don't have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 responsibility affair. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
Celebrities
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 born with their talent for singing or acting. They have not spent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 years at university like doctors and engineers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 they to take less You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 than fame You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
Celebrities
 spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 on unnecessary things. For example
, most of them waste their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 on expensive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, cars and parties.

I disagree with this opinion. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
Celebrities
 don't have a private life. They can't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
freely
. They can't walk the streets as well
 as ordinary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. Creating one music or film are difficult. And singers, actors are work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonefigureluminarypersonageherostar
celebrities
 donate their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
Helps
 sick You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. They spend their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 in the right way. And fame You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 have more problems than normal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
. 