Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

SOMEWHERE THAT I WANT TO SETTLED

SOMEWHERE THAT I WANT TO SETTLED AwPlL
In each of us, we always have a place that we want to settle. Some people want to live in a city, and some just want to live in rural areas, another one wishes they can live in the area near the sea or some of us do not care about that. For me, I wish I will settle in Da Lat. The first time that I am heard about Da Lat from my cousin. They visited Da Lat and gave me amount of gifs such as: strawberry; jams; candy; dry fruit…and so on. At that time, I was like: ‘OMG, the world has this perfect thing? ’ I just a little into it until I saw many pictures about Da Lat in the internet. There are fluffy, white clouds; many different kinds of flowers; farms…and so on. In that time, I decided that I wanted to settle in here. Da Lat has more than a beautiful place. I addicted to this site for numerous reasons. Their food suitable with my favor, they have various fruits; vegetables that I hope I can taste and the most important thing is I am a person who adore fruit. The weather in there is pretty nice to me. I like when I walk alone on the street; the air blows my hair and I can wear a hoodie. Cold weather suit on me, make me feel better than hot summer in Ho Chi Minh city. One more thing that stole my heart is charming view such as pine forests; waterfalls; cols; valleys. Farm also one of the reasons which make me want to settle in there. Looking at strawberry farm and tasting it, how wonderful there are. If it is possible, I will open a farm to plant every plant that I like. Night market is very funny spot, the aggregate all item that you want to buy. They will invite you stop at their shop with very cheerful attitude. I often take a rest by going to coffee shop and read books, what a coincidence, this wonderful place has numerous coffee shop with good sight and tranquil. I usually keep my spirit calm by look the sunset and sunrise. When I am living in Da Lat, it also more beautiful than one in my place now. Our body is always divided into two parts: soul and body when soul feels good, body feel similar. Green coverage of Da Lat quite good, it is less toxic emissions than cities so I believe that my heath will be improved simultaneously, my soul will be peaceful. I think that when I am forty or fifty years old, I will come to live in Da Lat. Right now, to make my dream come true I ought to work harder and harder. I hope my dream comes true; Da Lat wait for me. I hope my dream come true; Da Lat wait for me.
In each of us, we always have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
that we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
settle
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in a city, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in rural areas, another one wishes they can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in the area near the sea or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of us do not care about that. For me, I wish I will
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
settle
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat.

The
first
time that I
am heard
about
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat from my cousin. They visited
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat and gave me amount of
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "gives", the plural form of the noun 'gif'?
gifs
such as: strawberry; jams; candy; dry fruit…and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. At that time, I was like: ‘OMG, the world has this perfect thing? ’ I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
into it until I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
pictures about
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat
The usual collocation for technology is "on," not "in." It is better to say this: "on the internet".
in the internet
. There are fluffy, white clouds;
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
kinds of flowers; farms…and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. In that time, I decided that I wanted to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
settle
in here.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat has more than a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
. I addicted to this site for numerous reasons. Their food suitable with my favor, they have various fruits; vegetables that I hope I can taste and the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
thing is I am a person who adore fruit. The weather in there is pretty nice to me. I like when I walk alone on the street; the air blows my hair and I can wear a hoodie.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Cold
weather suit on me,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me feel better than hot summer in
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Ho Chi Minh city
. One more thing that stole my heart is charming view such as pine forests; waterfalls; cols; valleys. Farm
also
one of the reasons which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
settle
in there. Looking at strawberry farm and tasting it, how wonderful there are. If it is possible, I will open a farm to plant every plant that I like. Night market is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
funny
spot, the aggregate all item that you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
want
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
. They will invite you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
at their shop with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
cheerful attitude. I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
take a rest by going to coffee shop and read books, what a coincidence, this wonderful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
has numerous coffee shop with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
sight and tranquil. I
usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
my spirit calm by look the sunset and sunrise. When I am living in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat,
It seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.
it
also
more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
than one in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. Our body is always divided into two parts: soul and body when soul feels
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
, body feel similar. Green coverage of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat quite
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
, it is less toxic emissions than cities
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I believe that my heath will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
simultaneously
, my soul will be peaceful.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that when I am forty or fifty years
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
live
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat. Right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
my dream
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
true I ought to work harder and harder. I hope my dream
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
true;
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat wait for me. I hope my dream
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
true;
Possible spelling mistake found.
Da
Lat wait for me.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay SOMEWHERE THAT I WANT TO SETTLED

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
487 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • SOMEWHERE THAT I WANT TO SETTLED