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Thank you for your sharing. I think it makes more sense to share my own thoughts with you.

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Thank you for your sharing. I think it makes more sense to share my own thoughts with you. You know, our CS department is a extremely United team. And for QS they are great members that I have worked with consequently far. And moving the image to the Clarification tab is mostly not due to the fact it meets the KPI. In the process of working, there will be a number of parallel work, consequently to ensure the correct analysis of the customer's requirements as well as the correct classification of Extra requirements or Pixelz Error, we ought to spend more time. Even had to quickly communicate through a number of channels outside of Slack with other departments for advice. (I usually do this with QA and PS a lot in cases where I'm not confident). That's also something to clarify due to the fact it's internal, that's why we switched to the Clarification tab to wait or take time for something more urgent. We will then return to those cases to further investigate previously understanding the right issue to contact the right people or departments. And also sometimes we do it too quick leading to mistakenly clicking the “Move to Clarification” button, it's our fault. And in fact, I also think at least 1 of us has moved images through the Clarification tab for no good reason. It's certainly not much, though. on the contrary, that shouldn't be. We will be more serious. And until now, a Phuc has reminded QS a plethora of times about this. Currently, we are working extremely hard to meet the mutual expectations of you and Phuc. We will try more. in light of the fact that English communication is not really good, QS still has a number of reservations in all communication with you. We still encourage each other to strive to be able to express more. Thank you SẾP (is an informal way of saying that I only use for managers I respect) for listening and also caring and helping me and QS a lot until today. Have a good night!
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You know, our CS department is
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a
extremely
United team. And for QS they are great members that I have worked with
consequently
far. And moving the image to the
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Clarification
tab is
mostly
not due to the
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fact
it meets the KPI.

In the process of working, there will be a number of parallel work,
consequently
to ensure the correct analysis of the customer's requirements
as well
as the correct classification of Extra requirements or
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Pixelz
Error, we ought to spend more time. Even had to
quickly
communicate through a number of channels outside of Slack with other departments for advice. (I
usually
do this with QA and PS a lot in cases where I'm not confident). That's
also
something to clarify due to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fact
it's internal, that's why we switched to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Clarification
tab to wait or take time for something more urgent. We will then return to those cases to
further
investigate previously understanding the right issue to contact the right
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people
or departments. And
also
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sometimes
we do it too quick leading to
mistakenly
clicking the “
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Move
to
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Clarification”
button, it's our fault.

And in
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, I
also
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think
at least 1 of us has
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moved
images through the
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tab for no
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good
reason. It's
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not much, though.
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on
the contrary, that shouldn't be. We will be more serious.

And until
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, a
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Phuc
has reminded QS a plethora of times about this.
Currently
, we are working
extremely
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hard
to
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meet
the mutual expectations of you and
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Phuc
. We will try more.

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in
light of the
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fact
that English communication is not
really
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good
, QS
still
has a number of reservations in all communication with you. We
still
encourage each other to strive to be able to express more.

Thank you
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SẾP
(is an informal way of saying that I
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only
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use
for managers I respect) for listening and
also
caring and helping me and QS a lot until
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today
.

Have a
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night!
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IELTS essay Thank you for your sharing. I think it makes more sense to share my own thoughts with you.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
349 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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