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Thank you for your sending the confirmation today. We are pleased to confirm your booking a superior double room for the night from 22th July to 25th July, 2021. The cost for this room will be 135 dollars per night, include tax, newspaper and light breakfast (include cofee, toast and jam). A total 405 dollars will be charged to the credit card you provided.

Thank you for your sending the confirmation today. We are pleased to confirm your booking a superior double room for the night from 22th July to 25th July, 2021. The cost for this room will be 135 dollars per night, include tax, newspaper and light breakfast (include cofee, toast and jam). A total 405 dollars will be charged to the credit card you provided. JLG2D
Thank you for your sending the confirmation today. We are pleased to confirm your booking a superior double room for the night from 22th July to 25th July, 2021. The cost for this room will be 135 dollars per night, include tax, newspaper and light breakfast (include coffee, toast and jam). A total 405 dollars will be charged to the credit card you provided. I would like to take this opportunity to let you know that we have a fully equipment gym, an indoor swimming pool for exclusive use of our guests at no extra charge. In addition, we have a restaurant located on the premises where you can order lunch or dinner at your discretion. Should you require transportation from the airport to city, we can arrange special shuttle bus airport car for you. In this case you can make a call to us at the one of the white courtesy phones located at the arrival terminals. Press no 15 to reach ODG reception. We look forward to welcoming you to ODG. Please do not hesitate to contact with us as you have any question regarding to your reservation or our hotel.
Thank you for your sending the confirmation
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today
. We are
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pleased
to confirm your booking a superior double room for the night from
Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.
22th
July to 25th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "July 2021".
July, 2021
. The cost for this room will be 135 dollars per night, include tax, newspaper and light breakfast (include coffee, toast and jam). A total 405 dollars will
be charged
to the credit card you provided. I would like to take this opportunity to
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let
you know that we have a
You used an adverb ('fully') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('equipment') instead of another adjective.
fully equipment
gym, an indoor swimming pool for exclusive
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use
of our guests at no extra charge.
In addition
, we have a restaurant located on the premises where you can order lunch or dinner at your discretion.

Should you require transportation from the airport to city, we can arrange special shuttle bus airport car for you.
In this case
you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a call to us at the one of the white courtesy phones located at the arrival terminals. Press no 15 to reach ODG reception.

We look forward to welcoming you to ODG.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
do not hesitate to contact with us as you have any question
The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".
regarding to
your reservation or our hotel.
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IELTS essay Thank you for your sending the confirmation today. We are pleased to confirm your booking a superior double room for the night from 22th July to 25th July, 2021. The cost for this room will be 135 dollars per night, include tax, newspaper and light breakfast (include cofee, toast and jam). A total 405 dollars will be charged to the credit card you provided.

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193 words
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