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Thank you for the opportunity to provide my recommendations to support Fatima Zulfigarli in her quest to study Information Technology at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics .

Thank you for the opportunity to provide my recommendations to support Fatima Zulfigarli in her quest to study Information Technology at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics. a70Bo
Thank you for the opportunity to provide my recommendations to support Fatima Zulfigarli in her quest to study Information Technology at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics. It is a distinct honor to support her application. I make it a practise to provide a recommendation only for students that I believe have the highest interest, discipline and abilities to successfully complete the work required to achieve success in their program of study. Fatima is an outstanding student and is extremely interested in an opportunity to earn experience at America. I have observed first-hand that she is highly competent and interested in studying Information Technology at an institution that will provide her with both a premier education and also opportunities to participate in applied research activities.  She is highly intelligent, well-rounded, extremely well spoken and conversant, dependable and motivated.  She has a great sense of humor to balance her serious, inquisitive and entrepreneurial side.  Students and faculty gravitate to Fatima to brainstorm about assignments and to discover solutions to challenging problems and assignments.  I have observed Fatima's problem-solving skills and her drive to help others learn and understand.  She is proud of Azerbaijani heritage and she broke a record about speed reading in Azerbaijan.  She has a lot of interviews about speed reading in Azerbaijan and Russian channels. I want to mention that also, some interviews are shared by youtube channel of Ministry of Education. Since becoming a teenager, Fatima has been involved in activities to create solutions to knotty problems.  She has been active in developing innovative computer-based solutions in classroom settings during this academic year. I believe that Fatima will be an extraordinarily successful at SUSI Summer exchange program. I also believe that she will contribute extensively to academic discussions and will add to the body of knowledge if given the opportunity. Again, it is my honor to recommend student of our university UNEC. Please reach me via email at sabuhi. tanriverdiyev@unec. edu. az for additional information.
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Zulfigarli
in her quest to study Information Technology at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics. It is a distinct honor to support her application.

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students
that I believe have the highest interest, discipline and abilities to
successfully
complete the work required to achieve success in their program of study.

Fatima is an outstanding
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student
and is
extremely
interested in an opportunity to earn experience at America.

I have observed
first
-hand that she is
highly
competent and interested in studying Information Technology at an institution that will provide her with both a premier education and
also
opportunities to participate in applied research activities.  She is
highly
intelligent, well-rounded,
extremely
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well spoken
and conversant, dependable and motivated.  She has a great sense of humor to balance her serious, inquisitive and entrepreneurial side.
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 Students
and faculty gravitate to Fatima to brainstorm about assignments and to discover solutions to challenging problems and assignments.  I have observed Fatima's problem-solving
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skills
and her drive to
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help
others learn and understand.  She is proud of Azerbaijani
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heritage and
she broke a record about speed reading in Azerbaijan.  She has
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interviews about speed reading in Azerbaijan and Russian channels. I want to mention that
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interviews
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youtube
channel of Ministry of Education.

Since becoming a
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, Fatima has
been involved
in activities to create solutions to knotty problems.  She has been active in developing innovative computer-based solutions in classroom settings during this academic year.

I believe that Fatima will be an
extraordinarily
successful at
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SUSI
Summer exchange program.

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also
believe that she will contribute
extensively
to academic discussions and will
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to the body of knowledge if
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Again, it is my honor to recommend
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of our university
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UNEC
.

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reach me via email at
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sabuhi
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tanriverdiyev@unec
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IELTS essay Thank you for the opportunity to provide my recommendations to support Fatima Zulfigarli in her quest to study Information Technology at the Azerbaijan State University of Economics.

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
328 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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