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How do you project yourself and your life in 3 years' time?

How do you project yourself and your life in 3 years' time? gq7nd
Three years is enough for a student like me to change. But I think, in the future, I won’t change too much from now. In three years, I will be studying in a good high school, having more friends and relationships. I will be more mature, serious because I have already grown up and can be independent. I think at that time I will study harder so that I can get into a good university to have a bright future. My dream job is to be a doctor so I will try to learn well in Biology and Chemistry. I don’t have a very good physique and a beautiful body at the moment. But from now I have been doing exercise, so I think I will be taller and have better health, I hope so! I think planning for the future is very essential. I hope that with all my efforts, I will be successful and become a good student.
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high school, having more friends and relationships. I will be more mature, serious
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I have already grown up and can be independent. I
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at that time I will study harder
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that I can
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into a
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university to have a bright future. My dream job is to be a doctor
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I will try to learn well in Biology and Chemistry. I don’t have a
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good
physique and a
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beautiful
body at the moment.
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But
from
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now
I have been doing exercise,
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so
I
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think
I will be taller and have better health, I hope
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so
! I
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think
planning for the future is
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essential. I hope that with all my efforts, I will be successful and become a
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IELTS essay How do you project yourself and your life in 3 years' time?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
160 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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