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positive and negative effects of supermarkets over small shops

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The economical development of a nation is highly dependent on the tertiary sector- out of which shoping has always been a prominent way. However, the preference given to a supermarket or a local market is subjective. But, it also depends on the availability and the reach of shops to narrow corners of cities. With the advancement of technology, the pace of building supermarkets has taken a significant speed, which, I believe is a positive aspect for development. The most prominent, supportive assertion would be the availability of all variety of products under one roof, which makes it easier for customers to compare products in real time. This not only facilitates them with greater discounts but also the flexibility of returning the product under some conditions. However, it also has negative effect on small shops and local market, since, people find it more comfortable buying products from a supermarket than from a local shop. As a result, small shop Keepers are facing a lose owing to which they are switching to different small businesses. In conclusion, I believe, Supermarkets help enhancing the economy and developing the better lifestyle. But, its adverse effect on small shops is not negligible. And in future, supermarkets are going to eradicate small shops and markets. Thus, governments can help aid small businesses to preserve the economy.
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development of a nation is
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dependent on the tertiary sector- out of which
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has always been a prominent way.
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to a supermarket or a local market is subjective.
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shops
to narrow corners of cities.

With the advancement of technology, the pace of building supermarkets has taken a significant speed, which, I believe is a
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positive
aspect for development. The most prominent, supportive assertion would be the availability of all variety of
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products
under one roof, which
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makes
it easier for customers to compare
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products
in real time. This not
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facilitates them with greater discounts
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also
the flexibility of returning the
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product
under
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some
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also
has
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small
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shops
and local market, since,
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people
find it more comfortable buying
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products
from a supermarket than from a local
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shop
.
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,
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small
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shop
Keepers are facing a
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owing to which they are switching to
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different
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small
businesses.

In conclusion
, I believe, Supermarkets
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help
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enhancing
the economy and developing the better lifestyle.
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But
, its adverse effect on
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small
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shops
is not negligible. And
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, supermarkets are going to eradicate
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small
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shops
and markets.
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governments
can
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small
businesses to preserve the economy.
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IELTS essay positive and negative effects of supermarkets over small shops

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
220 words
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