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Thank for your best friend

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Thank you for being by my side all these years. Thank you for when I'm sad or happy, just when I call, you're always there. Thank you for always listening to the confides, the things I don't know to share with anyone. Thank you for always being the one to motivate me and keep me motivated every time I fall. Thank you for believing in me when even I no longer believe in myself, for always encouraging, comforting, always believing that I can do it. Thank you for always understanding my heartless words. Thank you for always being honest with me. Thank you for always making up in every argument. Thank you for always making an effort to accept my annoying, irritable personality. Thank you for the times we're together, we don't need to be reserved, be careful with our words for fear of offending someone, and be comfortable being ourselves. Thank you for the past months and years, never once left me when I needed you, no matter how sunny or rainy it was, I still tried to carry you. Thank you for not managing the time, but in the cold weather of Hanoi, at 5am ran out to pick me up, not letting me go by myself. After family, you are the second most important person to me. It is said that finding a "real" best friend is very difficult - someone who listens to you share all your problems, family problems, all the things that make you stressed… Never thought, a day - There will be someone who is willing to run to me whenever I need to share my joys and sorrows. I feel so lucky to have found such a person in my life. Thanks for everything. I love u, with all my heart.
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you for being by my side all these years.
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you for when I'm sad or happy,
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when I call, you're always there.
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you for always listening to the confides, the things I don't know to share with anyone.
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you for always being the one to motivate me and
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keep
me motivated every time I fall.
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you for believing in me when even I no longer believe in myself, for always encouraging, comforting, always believing that I can do it.
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you for always understanding my heartless words.
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you for always being honest with me.
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you for always making up in every argument.
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you for always making an effort to accept my annoying, irritable personality.
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you for the times we're together, we don't need to
be reserved
, be careful with our words for fear of offending someone, and be comfortable being ourselves.
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you for the past months and years, never once
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me when I needed you, no matter how sunny or rainy it was, I
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you for not managing the time,
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in the
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weather of Hanoi, at 5am ran out to pick me up, not letting me go by myself. After family, you are the second most
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important
person to me. It
is said
that finding a
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real
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best friend is
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difficult
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someone who listens to you share all your problems, family problems, all the things that
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make
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… Never
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There will be someone who is willing to run to me whenever I need to share my joys and sorrows. I feel
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lucky to have found such a person in my life.
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for everything. I
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love
u, with all my heart.
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IELTS essay Thank for your best friend

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
299 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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