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choose a new area of technology or invention and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

choose a new area of technology or invention and discuss its advantages and disadvantages. 2KR3J
Internet technology has been improved in recent years and a number of countries compete to develop it such as, China and The USA because of the power of it. If it has the best technology of it. That mean it can control everything. However, this technology brings benefits and drawbacks. There are a number of advantages of using internet. The first is that it makes our life easy for instance, people can find any things on the internet such as fixing things at home. If they have anything at house need fix, they will use the internet to search in it without any help and in short time. Another important advantage which should be consider is commination. It allows person to connect his loved one in anywhere and anytime Foe example, student who study oversea can communicate with their relatives. That aids them to reduce the feeling homesick. However, there are also some demerits of internet. Online abuse especially for children through it is one of the most serious issue in the world. The study shows a dramatic increase in sexual abuse via the internet. That dues to impact their adulthood same as face-to-face abuse. As a result, many developed countries start awareness parents and children.
Internet technology has been
improved
in recent years and a number of countries compete to develop it such as, China and The USA
because
of the power of it.
If
it has the best technology of it. That mean it can control everything.
However
, this technology brings benefits and drawbacks.

There are a number of advantages of using internet. The
first
is that it
makes
our life easy
for instance
,
people
can find any things on the internet such as fixing things at home. If they have anything at
house
need
fix
, they will
use
the internet to search in it without any
help
and in short time. Another
important
advantage which should be
consider
is
commination
. It
allows
person to connect his
loved
one in anywhere and anytime Foe example, student who study oversea can communicate with their relatives. That aids them to
reduce
the feeling homesick.

However
, there are
also
some
demerits of internet. Online abuse
especially
for children through it is one of the most serious
issue
in the world. The study
shows
a dramatic increase in sexual abuse via the internet. That dues to impact their adulthood same as face-to-face abuse.
As a result
,
many
developed countries
start
awareness parents and children.
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IELTS essay choose a new area of technology or invention and discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

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