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Solutions to help people consume less sugar-based drinks

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There are several solutions to help people consume less sugary drinks. First, the government should levy higher taxes. Due to increased taxes on products such as coke, soda or monster energy drinks, the price of these products will increase. This will have an impact on the amount of drinks that customers consume, secondly the state should launch more health education campaigns. organize a campaign to help people supplement health information, talk about the harmful effects of soft drinks and carbonated drinks. thereby helping people to better understand and understand about carbonated drinks that have bad effects on health and choose healthier drinks to protect their health. The result will help people consume less soft drinks.
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, the
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government
should levy higher taxes. Due to increased taxes on products such as coke, soda or monster energy
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drinks
, the price of these products will increase. This will have an impact on the amount of
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drinks
that customers consume,
secondly
the state should launch more
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education campaigns.
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organize
a campaign to
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supplement
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health
information, talk about the harmful effects of soft
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drinks
and carbonated
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drinks
.
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thereby
helping
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people
to better understand and understand about carbonated
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drinks
that have
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bad
effects on
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health
and choose healthier
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drinks
to protect their
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health
. The result will
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help
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people
consume less soft
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drinks
.
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IELTS essay Solutions to help people consume less sugar-based drinks

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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