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To begin with, I was born and bred with a nice cooperative family in Syria, where all of us work in the medical field, my parents live in Saudi Arabia, and I and my siblings live in the capital of Syria. My father is a general surgeon and he is the cornerstone of my family. He has been working in surgery since 1992. My lovely mother is the sweetest person and the kindest-hearted woman I have ever seen. She is a general practitioner doctor besides taking great care of her family. My two brothers are ambitious students at the medical school of Damascus University. The elder one at the sixth grade, the other at the second grade. In addition, my older sister is an ophthalmic resident in the final year of her residency at Al Mowasat Hospital in Damascus.
To
begin
with, I
was born
and bred with a nice cooperative family in Syria, where all of us work in the medical field, my parents
live
in Saudi Arabia, and I and my siblings
live
in the capital of Syria. My father is a general
surgeon and
he is the cornerstone of my family. He has been working in surgery since 1992. My lovely mother is the sweetest person and the kindest-hearted woman I have ever
seen
. She is a general practitioner doctor
besides
taking great care of her family. My two brothers are ambitious students at the medical school of Damascus University. The elder one at the sixth grade, the other at the second grade.
In addition
, my older sister is an ophthalmic resident in the final year of her residency at Al
Mowasat
Hospital in Damascus.
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IELTS essay Tell us about your family background?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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