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Wow, I’m 0. 1 higher than the benchmark. I passed I was ready to face a new challenge. It was difficult for me to choose between studying in my city high school or living away from my parents to study in my dream school. I love challenges so I want to acquire new things everyday. At that time, I didn’t think that decision would change my life. Luckily, my uncle lived in this city though it’s quite far from my school. However, Living with relatives may be better than in a dormitory. One month in HCMC, I learned how to live independently, to care for myself, and to face problems.
Wow, I’m 0. 1 higher than the benchmark. I passed

I was ready to face a new challenge. It was difficult for me to choose between studying in my city high school or living away from my parents to study in my dream school. I
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love
challenges
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so
I want to acquire new things
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everyday
. At that time, I didn’t
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think
that decision would
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change
my life.

Luckily, my uncle
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lived
in this city though it’s quite far from my school.
However
, Living with relatives may be better than in a dormitory. One month in
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HCMC
, I learned how to
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live
independently
, to care for myself, and to face problems.

IELTS essay tell us about a time you study

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
110 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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