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tell us about a time you step out your comfort zone

tell us about a time you step out your comfort zone L9nO1
Feeling the hot air of summer days, I was on my way to Phan Boi Chau primary school in my hometown to give their students a lot of old books and stationeries which were donated to my own charitable project, DeliveRead. I realized that 0. 1 has changed my life. That was a great experience! Back to 2 years ago, in grade 9, I was dreaming of studying at VNU-HCM High School for the Gifted, of which every student wants to be a part. So do I.
Feeling the hot air of summer days, I was on my way to
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Phan
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Chau
primary school in my hometown to give their students
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a lot of
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old
books and
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stationeries
which
were donated
to my
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own
charitable project,
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DeliveRead
. I realized that 0. 1 has
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changed
my life.

That was a great experience! Back to 2 years ago, in grade 9, I was dreaming of studying at
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VNU-HCM
High School for the Gifted, of which every student wants to be a part.
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So
do I.
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IELTS essay tell us about a time you step out your comfort zone

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
87 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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