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Tell the story of Halloween and then summary it

Tell the story of Halloween and then summary it Jw57B

Halloween is a festival which takes place on 31st October and we all know that it’s a very popular festival in Western countries. However, it’s been gaining its popularity in Asian countries like Vietnam. Over 2000 years ago, people believed that on the night of 31st October evil spirits went through the boundaries between the world of the living and the dead to cross to the world of the living. Therefore, people were very scared about this, so they wore handmade masks and scary costumes, decorated their houses with things like jack-o-lanterns, skulls and skeletons to disguise themselves from the spirits so that they wouldn’t harm them. In addition, on Halloween, children will go “trick or treating”, they go to many houses and ask for candies from adults. All in all, people have a great time together during the Halloween festival.

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