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Evaluation of Project Processes At the beginning, I felt that our group was not very compatible, though things have worked better than I thought. We primarily worked together on Team and we also had a group chat on Instagram which made it really simple for us to discuss and exchange information. All members have given constructive ideas and contributions in the working process. Though, we were still hesitant to share personal thoughts, and because we were working online, it was possible to misunderstand other people's viewpoints. As a result, we had some issues when determining the project's aim at the outset. The team’s plan was going quiet on track and efficiently as all members finished their job on time. We divided the work equally and set the deadline logically from the start so all members knew exactly what they had to do. Though, conflicts arise when members want to add information on other members' parts. We had spent more time discussing before coming up with the final research. Our team leader is good at creating a comfortable working condition for the group. However he was not very proactive in promoting members to complete their task, and he lacked control over the working process. Reflection: Evaluation of Individual Performance I did my job really well as a researcher. My role was to research the real problems of migration and the reasons why people migrate, which was a very vital part that needed to be analyzed thoroughly. I lack knowledge on this issue so at first, I encountered some difficulties and wasted time in finding the sources and filtering the overwhelming information. However, after getting feedback from my teammates, I completed my part quite well as the information is detailed but not overly, enough for the audience to understand. I don’t think that I have done my best as a team member. Although I gave constructive ideas and contributions to the group’s works, I didn’t truly connect with my team members. All of them are really pleasant and open which created a very comfortable working environment but I wasn't familiar with it yet so I usually felt shy when giving personal opinions. In the future, I think that for myself to perform better, I will try harder to bond and connect with other members and be more proactive in sharing my personal opinions with the groups. Reflection: Benefits and Challenges of working in a Team Working as a team has many benefits. First, we can support each other by dividing the work efficiently and evenly among all members. . This allows us to choose the job based on an individual's strengths and prowess which helps to avoid underperformance. For instance, with this project, I was confident about my editing skill so I took responsibility in making the video. Working as a team means more people are contributing to the working process, and more ideas and opinions can be given in order to improve the quality of the outcome. Hence, we can yield a better result. In this project, all members in my group have given constructive ideas. As a result, we were able to provide an in-depth analysis that has shown different aspects about our issue - migration. However, there are still some drawbacks of working as a group. Working as a team necessitates lots of communication, which is where I struggled the most because I was sometimes too hesitant to express my own thoughts. . Misconstruing information can also occur during teamwork, due to the different opinions and views from different team members. In addition, as we are working online, which is already a time-consuming process for transferring information, some members can also be distracted from the group work, as they don’t pay enough attention when we are having a meeting. Consequently, our conversation was constrained and misunderstanding can take place. In the future, we should spend more time bonding with others and exchanging more personal opinions in order to improve the effectiveness of our group's work. In particular to improve my performance, I will have to be more congenial, approachable, as well as aggressively share my personal thoughts with the groups
Evaluation of Project Processes

At the beginning, I felt that our
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group
was not
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very
compatible, though things have worked better than I
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thought
. We
primarily
worked together on
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Team and
we
also
had a
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group
chat on Instagram which made it
really
simple for us to discuss and exchange
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information
. All
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members
have
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given
constructive
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ideas
and contributions in the
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working
process. Though, we were
still
hesitant to share
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personal
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thoughts
, and
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because
we were
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working
online, it was possible to misunderstand
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other
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people
's viewpoints.
As a result
, we had
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some
issues when determining the project's aim at the outset.

The
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team’s
plan was going quiet on
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track
and
efficiently
as all
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members
finished their job on
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time
. We divided the
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work
equally
and set the deadline
logically
from the
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start
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so
all
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members
knew exactly what they had to do. Though, conflicts arise when
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members
want to
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add
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information
on
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other
members' parts. We had spent more
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time
discussing
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before
coming up with the final research.

Our
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team
leader is
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good
at creating a comfortable
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working
condition for the
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group
.
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However
he was not
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very
proactive in promoting
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members
to complete their task, and he lacked control over the
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working
process.

Reflection: Evaluation of Individual Performance

I did my job
really
well as a researcher. My role was to research the real problems of migration and the reasons why
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people
migrate, which was a
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very
vital part that needed to
be analyzed
thoroughly
. I lack knowledge on this issue
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so
at
first
, I encountered
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some
difficulties and wasted
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time
in finding the sources and filtering the overwhelming
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information
.
However
, after getting feedback from my teammates, I completed my part quite well as the
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information
is detailed
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but
not
overly
,
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enough
for the audience to understand.

I don’t
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think
that I have done my best as a
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team
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member
. Although I gave constructive
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ideas
and contributions to the
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group’s
works, I didn’t
truly
connect with my
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team
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members
. All of them are
really
pleasant and open which created a
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very
comfortable
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working
environment
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but
I wasn't familiar with it
yet
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so
I
usually
felt shy when giving
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personal
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opinions
. In the future, I
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think
that for myself to perform better, I will try harder to bond and connect with
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other
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members
and be more proactive in sharing my
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personal
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opinions
with the groups.

Reflection: Benefits and Challenges of
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working
in a Team

Working as a
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team
has
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many
benefits.
First
, we can support each
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other
by dividing the
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work
efficiently
and
evenly
among all
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members
.
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.
This
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allows
us to choose the job based on an individual's strengths and prowess which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to avoid underperformance.
For instance
, with this project, I was confident about my editing
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skill
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so
I took responsibility in making the video.
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Working
as a
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team
means more
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people
are contributing to the
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working
process, and more
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ideas
and
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opinions
can be
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given
in order to
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improve
the quality of the outcome.
Hence
, we can yield a better result. In this project, all
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members
in my
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group
have
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given
constructive
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ideas
.
As a result
, we were able to provide an in-depth analysis that has shown
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different
aspects about our issue
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-
migration.

However
, there are
still
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some
drawbacks of
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working
as a
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group
.
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Working
as a
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team
necessitates lots of communication, which is where I struggled the most
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because
I was
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sometimes
too hesitant to express my
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own
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thoughts
.
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.
Misconstruing
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information
can
also
occur during teamwork, due to the
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different
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opinions
and views from
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different
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team
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members
.
In addition
, as we are
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working
online, which is already a time-consuming process for transferring
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information
,
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some
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members
can
also
be distracted
from the
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group
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work
, as they don’t pay
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enough
attention when we are having a meeting.
Consequently
, our conversation
was constrained
and misunderstanding can take place.

In the future, we should spend more
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time
bonding with others and exchanging more
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personal
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opinions
in order to
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improve
the effectiveness of our group's
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work
.
In particular
to
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improve
my performance, I will
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have to
be more congenial, approachable,
as well
as
aggressively
share my
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personal
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thoughts
with the
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groups
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Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
690 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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