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Ha noi is the capital of Vietnam.Hanoi has many unique landscapes and traditional beauty. Speaking of Hanoi, it is famous for the scenic spots such as One Pillar Pagoda, Uncle Ho’s Mausoleum, Turtle Tower – Hoan Kiem Lake, West Lake, … I was born in Thai Binh .It is famous for the Keo Pagoda.'' Banh cay" is a local dish in my hometown.Thai Binh has no hills or mountains but there are many famous landmarks and beautiful scenes . When they come from far away, they often go by coach in groups or by private car with their family.Due to the widening of the road, there is no traffic jam in Thai Binh.I love my homeland very much not only about its beauty but also its culture, way of life, customs and people. It makes me feel peaceful even though I'm far away.

Ha noi is the capital of Vietnam. Hanoi has many unique landscapes and traditional beauty. Speaking of Hanoi, it is famous for the scenic spots such as One Pillar Pagoda, Uncle Ho’s Mausoleum, Turtle Tower – Hoan Kiem Lake, West Lake, … I was born in Thai Binh. It is famous for the Keo Pagoda. '' Banh cay" is a local dish in my hometown. Thai Binh has no hills or mountains but there are many famous landmarks and beautiful scenes. When they come from far away, they often go by coach in groups or by private car with their family. Due to the widening of the road, there is no traffic jam in Thai Binh. I love my homeland very much not only about its beauty but also its culture, way of life, customs and people. It makes me feel peaceful even though I'm far away. 8dyqG
Ha noi is the capital of Vietnam. Hanoi has many unique landscapes and traditional beauty. Speaking of Hanoi, it is famous for the scenic spots such as One Pillar Pagoda, Uncle Ho’s Mausoleum, Turtle Tower – Hoan Kiem Lake, West Lake, … I was born in Thai Binh. It is famous for the Keo Pagoda. '' Banh cay" is a local dish in my hometown. Thai Binh has no hills or mountains but there are many famous landmarks and beautiful scenes. When they come from far away, they often go by coach in groups or by private car with their family. Due to the widening of the road, there is no traffic jam in Thai Binh. I love my homeland very much not only about its beauty but also its culture, way of life, customs and people. It makes me feel peaceful even though I'm far away.
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IELTS essay Ha noi is the capital of Vietnam. Hanoi has many unique landscapes and traditional beauty. Speaking of Hanoi, it is famous for the scenic spots such as One Pillar Pagoda, Uncle Ho’s Mausoleum, Turtle Tower – Hoan Kiem Lake, West Lake, … I was born in Thai Binh. It is famous for the Keo Pagoda. '' Banh cay" is a local dish in my hometown. Thai Binh has no hills or mountains but there are many famous landmarks and beautiful scenes. When they come from far away, they often go by coach in groups or by private car with their family. Due to the widening of the road, there is no traffic jam in Thai Binh. I love my homeland very much not only about its beauty but also its culture, way of life, customs and people. It makes me feel peaceful even though I'm far away.

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