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Tell me the best moment of your love story

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as if the two partners were
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and a sense of inevitability about the relationship. A related
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more frantic style of
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called mania involves an obsessive, compulsive attitude toward one’s partner. Vast swings in mood from ecstasy to agony
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are typical of manic
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IELTS essay Tell me the best moment of your love story

Essay
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