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Nowadays people think that there are some negatives in city life

Nowadays people think that there are some negatives in city life 11RdM
Presence of a great deal of disruption to peace life is considered to be able to influence to move from city to countryside. The most visible and primary reasons will be provided below. All urban people is caring about is stressful life. Bustling cities are so annoying that it can lead to arise a vital range of challenges, including robbery, conflict which appears among humans in a hurry. Individuals can be disturbed by these kind of factors unless they ignore trifles. For instance, while commuting drivers sometimes have to encounter with peak time, that is the most well-known problem there, it results in being nervous unwillingly. Another cause of stress is that monthly high taxes which are said not merely to be impossible to pay without full-time job plus unnecessary because government makes deliberately effort to save money by some payments. This measure is obvious for each populations so they lose their emotions when administration demands them. It is crimes which are reported to be spread widely in cities, for this reason, it impacts on humans lifestyle negatively. There are a myriad of things, which may put people at risk for hurting the body or have companies come to bancruptcy, ranging from petty crime to organized one. Taking only white-collar crimes as an example, it creates numerous problems in company according to annual reports and even incomes of stuffs. These crimes basically come from egoism, cause of spreading the feeling is lacking sense of community. By way conclusion, mankind could face with some drawbacks, which is arisen by themselves, in cities.
Presence of a great deal of disruption to peace life
is considered
to be able to influence to
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move
from city to countryside. The most visible and primary reasons will
be provided
below. All urban
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people
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is
caring about is stressful life. Bustling
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cities
are
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so
annoying that it can lead to arise a vital range of challenges, including robbery, conflict which appears among humans in a hurry. Individuals can
be disturbed
by
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these kind
of factors unless they
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ignore
trifles.
For instance
, while commuting drivers
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sometimes
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have to
encounter with peak time,
that is
the most well-known problem there, it results in being nervous
unwillingly
. Another cause of
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stress
is that monthly high taxes which
are said
not
merely
to be impossible to pay without full-time job plus unnecessary
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because
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government
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makes
deliberately
effort to save money by
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some
payments. This measure is obvious for each populations
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so
they lose their emotions when administration demands them. It is
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crimes
which
are reported
to
be spread
widely
in
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cities
,
for this reason
, it impacts on humans lifestyle
negatively
. There are a
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myriad
of things, which may put
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people
at
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risk
for hurting the body or have
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companies
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come
to
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bancruptcy
, ranging from petty
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crime
to organized one. Taking
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only
white-collar
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crimes
as an example, it creates numerous problems in
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company
according to annual reports and even incomes of stuffs. These
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crimes
basically
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come
from egoism, cause of spreading the feeling is lacking sense of community. By way conclusion, mankind could face with
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some
drawbacks, which
is arisen
by themselves, in
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cities
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people think that there are some negatives in city life

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