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How to make cherry jam at home

How to make cherry jam at home DN096

First, a large sheet is placed around the cherry trees and the trees is shaken to get the cherries. Then the cherries are put in a large container, and they will be shipped to the processing plant. During the processing plant, the leaves and the stems are removed by machine. Along with that, the cherries are picked up by hand to remove the rotten cherries. Next, the cherries are washed with clean water and will be transported to the machine where the seed will be taken out. Once the cherries are ready they are cut into small pieces to be used as the base for the jam, and it will go into the pot along with water and sugar with a small amount of lemon juice. Until it is ready, the quality of the jam is checked by the experts to see if the jam is in the right conditions, the right thickness. Continuing the process, the jar is then filled with the jam and placed on the tray. The tray is then put in a cooler room where the jam will be cooled down to room temperature. After this time, the label is stuck in the jar. After labelling the jam is ready to be exported around the world.

First
, a large sheet is placed
 around the cherry trees and the trees is shaken
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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cherries
. Then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are put
 in a large container, and they will be shipped
 to the processing plant. During the processing plant, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and the stems are removed
 by machine. Along with that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are picked
 up by hand to remove the rotten You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are washed
 with clean water and will be transported
 to the machine where the seed will be taken
 out. Once the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
 are ready they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pieces to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as the base for the jam, and it will go into the pot along with water and sugar with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 amount of lemon juice. Until it is ready, the quality of the jam is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 by the experts to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 if the jam is in the right conditions, the right thickness. Continuing the process, the jar is then filled with the jam and placed on the tray. The tray is then put in a cooler room where the jam will be cooled
 down to room temperature. After this time, the label is stuck
 in the jar. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 labelling the jam is ready to be exported
 around the world. 