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My name is Tayyaba Ghori, I have done my bachelor in computational finance, so I did my experience in the banking sector, I developed my quantitative and analytical skills, so I have experience in cash management, account handle, compliance, ATM balance sheet, cash control financial and non-financial transactions following the bank at Hbl limited. I can manage time, team leading, Previously worked as a marketing intern, so I learned a lot in my bachelor study, I have strong technical skills like MS Word, MS Excel, MS PowerPoint, So I am doing work on multiple projects like drop shipping, I am learning and gain an experience, so I have a passion, hard work to learn more and gain an experience, I honestly believe that my education background in finance, statistics, economics, so I did my technical experience in MATLAB, E-views, SPSS, so I did my project in Effective inventory management, I had learned SQL Database, how to make inventory more effective and more changes in new functions like sales, order deliver fast, dashboard manage in time, which gave me the confidence and the requisite knowledge to grow my career. . I have built a strong foundation for myself through BSc but now I wish to take it further and claim complete proficiency in the field. So, before entering the professional world I wish to learn all that I could on the academic front, My future planning is to pursue my study in economics and finance.
My name is
Tayyaba
Ghori
, I have done my bachelor in computational finance,
so
I did my
experience
in the banking sector, I developed my quantitative and analytical
skills
,
so
I have
experience
in cash management, account handle, compliance, ATM balance sheet, cash control financial and non-financial transactions following the bank at
Hbl
limited. I can manage time, team leading, Previously worked as a marketing intern,
so
I learned a lot in my bachelor study, I have strong technical
skills
like MS Word, MS Excel, MS PowerPoint,
So
I am doing work on multiple projects like drop shipping, I am learning and gain an
experience
,
so
I have a passion,
hard
work to learn more and gain an
experience
, I
honestly
believe that my education background in finance, statistics, economics,
so
I did my technical
experience
in MATLAB, E-views,
SPSS
,
so
I did my project in Effective inventory management, I had learned SQL Database, how to
make
inventory more effective and more
changes
in new functions like sales, order deliver
fast
, dashboard manage in time, which gave me the confidence and the requisite knowledge to grow my career.
.
I have built a strong foundation for myself through
BSc
but
now
I wish to take it
further
and claim complete proficiency in the field.
So
,
before
entering the professional world I wish to learn all that I could on the academic front, My future planning is to pursue my study in economics and finance.
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