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Tell me about your last journey

Tell me about your last journey EdNkM

I was really worried about the journey. My journey is going by bus so i will feel sick and i have never travelled on my own before. My destination is about 400km that is from Binh Duong to Nha Trang. In the bus i just read article and listen to music because it helps me forget about feeling nausea. After that, i feel sleepy and i fall down into my dream in the elbow chair immediately. A long lapse of time, the bus finally come to Nha Trang then i get out of the bus and take a deep breath of the ocean air. I started booking hotels after i have a rest then i eat a lot of seafood and do variety of activities such ass play volleyball with resident, go sailing and surfing. Fortunately, my journey was hilarious, amusing without risky that i cared so much.

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 me forget about feeling nausea. After that, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 feel sleepy and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 fall down into my dream in the elbow chair immediately. A long lapse of time, the bus finally
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 then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 seafood and do variety of activities such ass play volleyball with resident, go sailing and surfing. Fortunately
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