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Describe a place that you like most

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The city that I like the most is Ha Noi since it is still steeped in tradition. There are many historical sites which are attractive many people from around the world to visit such as One Pillar Pagoda, Hoan Kiem Lake, and The Temple of Literature. Although the streets are always crowded with people from various provinces, the Hanoians lifestyle is still slower than other cities. Bat Trang Pottery, Van Phuc Silk Village, and Dong Ho Folk Painting are just a few of the traditional craft villages that help to make Ha Noi more ancient. Futhermore, we can easily observe street vendors who are considered as the unique of HaNoi culture on many city's streets. When I think of Ha Noi, those little things are enough to take me back to my childhood.
The city that I like the most is Ha
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since it is
still
steeped in tradition. There are
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many
historical sites which are attractive
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many
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people
from around the world to visit such as One Pillar Pagoda,
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Hoan
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Kiem
Lake, and The Temple of Literature. Although the streets are always crowded with
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people
from various provinces, the
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Hanoians
lifestyle is
still
slower than other cities. Bat
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Pottery, Van
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Silk Village, and Dong Ho Folk Painting are
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just
a few of the traditional craft villages that
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help
to
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make
Ha
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Noi
more ancient.
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, we can
easily
observe street vendors who
are considered
as the unique of
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HaNoi
culture on
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many
city's streets. When I
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think
of Ha
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Noi
, those
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IELTS essay Describe a place that you like most

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