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Tell me about the holiday you didn't enjoy.

Tell me about the holiday you didn't enjoy. Yw8rB

A month ago, I was on holiday in Greece with my friends. We rented a yacht for a week and went on a cruise. It was going to be great. Unfortunately, it turned out that I was seasick and I was dizzy all the time and I couldn't sleep and eat. There was also bad weather during the cruise. It was cloudy and raining for four days so we couldn't sunbathe. When we finished the cruise and wanted to go home, I lost my passport and we couldn't fly that day. We had to buy tickets for the next day flight which cost twice as much as before. It was certainly the worst holiday ever.

A month ago, I was on holiday in Greece with my friends. We rented a yacht for a week and went on a cruise. It was going to be great. Unfortunately, it turned out that I was Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).seasick, and
seasick and
 I was dizzy all the time and I couldn't sleep and eat. There was also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 weather during the cruise. It was cloudy and raining for four days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we couldn't sunbathe. When we finished the cruise and wanted to go home, I lost my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).passport, and
passport and
 we couldn't fly
 that day. We had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 tickets for the next
 day flight which cost twice as much as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. It was certainly
 the worst holiday ever. 