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Tell me about the holiday you didn't enjoy.

Tell me about the holiday you didn't enjoy. Yw8rB
A month ago, I was on holiday in Greece with my friends. We rented a yacht for a week and went on a cruise. It was going to be great. Unfortunately, it turned out that I was seasick and I was dizzy all the time and I couldn't sleep and eat. There was also bad weather during the cruise. It was cloudy and raining for four days so we couldn't sunbathe. When we finished the cruise and wanted to go home, I lost my passport and we couldn't fly that day. We had to buy tickets for the next day flight which cost twice as much as before. It was certainly the worst holiday ever.
A month ago, I was on holiday in Greece with my friends. We rented a yacht for a week and went on a cruise. It was going to be great. Unfortunately, it turned out that I was
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
seasick and
I was dizzy all the time and I couldn't sleep and eat. There was
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
weather during the cruise. It was cloudy and raining for four days
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so
we couldn't sunbathe. When we finished the cruise and wanted to go home, I lost my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
passport and
we couldn't
fly
that day. We had to
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buy
tickets for the
next
day flight which cost twice as much as
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before
. It was
certainly
the worst holiday ever.
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IELTS essay Tell me about the holiday you didn't enjoy.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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