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Describe and talk about a handmade object that you have.

Describe and talk about a handmade object that you have. 6ajb0
Well, everyone likes to receive handmade presents because a gift is a token of love. We can express our feelings by giving a gift to our near and dear ones. And here I would like to talk about a present which I received from my mother. My mother is a skillful woman. Although, she was a teacher and so busy, she also, made handmade objects with sequins and beads. When we were children, sometimes my mother sewed clothes for us. When I was only 8 years old, I received a gift from her. Well, the gift was a jacket. It was a woolen jacket that she woven it in the summer with yarn and rods. It was very beautiful and It was a combination of cream and green colors. Also it had wonderful frog-shaped buttons that, I watched them for hours. At those days, we went to school on foot, and winters was so cold and windy. I woke up and put in my uniform then my beautiful jacket on our way to school and felt happiness and handsome. I was overwhelmed with pride when my classmates praised my jacket or allowed me to touch its frog buttons. However, later I bought expensive and beautiful dresses but I was somehow convinced that the one My mother made was prettier. Maybe that was because of my love and affection for her. Yet I loved it so much and I remembered my mother felt so proud for making this gift for me.
Well, everyone likes to receive handmade presents
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is a token of
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love
. We can express our feelings by giving a
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to our near and dear ones. And here I would like to talk about a present which I received from my mother.

My
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mother
is a skillful woman. Although, she was a teacher and
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busy, she
also
, made handmade objects with sequins and beads. When we were children,
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sometimes
my
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mother
sewed clothes for us.

When I was
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8 years
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, I received a
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from her. Well, the
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was a
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jacket
. It was a woolen
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jacket
that she woven it in the summer with yarn and rods. It was
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and It was a combination of cream and green colors.
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Also
it had wonderful frog-shaped buttons that, I
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them for hours.

At those days, we went to school on foot, and winters was
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cold
and windy. I woke up and put in my uniform then my
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beautiful
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jacket
on our way to school and felt happiness and handsome.

I
was overwhelmed
with pride when my classmates praised my
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jacket
or
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allowed
me to touch its frog buttons.

However
, later I
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bought
expensive and
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beautiful
dresses
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I was somehow convinced that the one My
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mother
made was prettier. Maybe that was
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of my
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and affection for her.
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it
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much and I remembered my
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felt
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proud for making this
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for me.
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IELTS essay Describe and talk about a handmade object that you have.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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