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Tell me about a person you know who uses the internet too much

Tell me about a person you know who uses the internet too much 3L5Gl
When tell about a person uses the internet all the time, I must choose Linh, who is my friend and also be a gamer. She is a game junkie so that she can play game for 2 or 3 days without take a break. For her, playing game is the only entertainment type. Eventually, she intends to join competition to win manh prizes. Although she knows about playing game to much is not good for health, he not intends to give up it in the near future
When
tell
about a person
uses
the internet all the time, I
must
choose
Linh
, who is my friend and
also
be a gamer. She is a game junkie
so
that she can play game for 2 or 3 days without take a break. For her, playing game is the
only
entertainment type.
Eventually
, she intends to
join
competition to win
manh
prizes. Although she knows about playing game
to
much is not
good
for health, he not intends to give up it in the near
future
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IELTS essay Tell me about a person you know who uses the internet too much

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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