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Tell me about a bad habit that you have broken

Tell me about a bad habit that you have broken WYy8W
I have never been so excited in my life since last year. Back then, I didn’t have a plan for my future, and believe it or not my life was up in the air. I had to do something about it so I decided to start a new leaf in my life and concentrate on my goals. As a result, now instead of sitting down and imagining my future, I have knuckled down and got on with some routine. I set for myself long-term and short-term goals. Therefore, having a plan has a place in my every minute. Since then having a plan has had a place in my life. And I gotta say, it makes me feel alive.
I have never been
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excited in my
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life
since last year. Back then, I didn’t have a plan for my future, and believe it or not my
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life
was up in the air. I had to do something about it
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so
I decided to
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start
a new leaf in my
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life
and concentrate on my goals.
As a result
,
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now
instead
of sitting down and imagining my future, I have knuckled down and
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got
on with
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some
routine. I set for myself long-term and short-term goals.
Therefore
, having a plan has a place in my every minute.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
then having a plan has had a place in my
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life
. And I
The word 'gotta' is informal. Consider an alternative.
gotta
say, it
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makes
me feel alive.

IELTS essay Tell me about a bad habit that you have broken

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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