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Tell me about a bad habit that you have broken

Tell me about a bad habit that you have broken WYy8W

I have never been so excited in my life since last year. Back then, I didn’t have a plan for my future, and believe it or not my life was up in the air. I had to do something about it so I decided to start a new leaf in my life and concentrate on my goals. As a result, now instead of sitting down and imagining my future, I have knuckled down and got on with some routine. I set for myself long-term and short-term goals. Therefore, having a plan has a place in my every minute. Since then having a plan has had a place in my life. And I gotta say, it makes me feel alive.

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 since last year. Back then, I didn’t have a plan for my future, and believe it or not my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
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 routine. I set for myself long-term and short-term goals. Therefore
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