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Tell me a little your hometown

Tell me a little your hometown 06Pmq
I lived in Cam Ranh City, which is a beautiful bay with a long coastline of Khanh Hoa province. My hometown famous for its landscapes such as Bai Dai, RongMount, . . . Its also well-known for its sea food of course! I lived in here 19 years old, which I later realized was a wonderful time for me to develop my personality throughout my formative years. Cam Ranh's a great place to live. It's a peaceful city for people take a break in the bustling life. But sometimes, I find it a bit boring. There not much nightlife and sometime it feels a bit cut off from the wider world. Cam Ranh is almost unrecognisable compared to 20 or 30 years ago. There are certainly more and more tourist theseday by beautiful beach, seafood and friendly people in here.
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Ranh
City, which is a
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beautiful
bay with a long coastline of
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Khanh
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Hoa
province. My hometown
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famous
for its landscapes such as
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Bai
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Dai
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RongMount
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Its
also
well-known for its sea food
of course
! I
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lived
in here 19 years
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old
, which I later realized was a wonderful time for me to develop my personality throughout my formative years. Cam
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Ranh
's a great place to
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live
. It's a peaceful city for
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people
take a break in the bustling life.
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But
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sometimes
, I find it a bit boring. There not much nightlife and sometime it feels a bit
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cut
off from the wider world. Cam
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Ranh is
almost
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unrecognisable
compared to 20 or 30 years ago. There are
certainly
more and more tourist
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theseday
by
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beautiful
beach, seafood and friendly
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IELTS essay Tell me a little your hometown

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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