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internet is important and discuss the advantages and disadvantages

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Internet is one of the greatest achievements of human’s invention and also a source of every information. It has not only provided information but also made the life easier for the people. There are many advantages of it. One such is availability of any kind of books and daily news updates. In terms of books, variety of genre from horror to adventures to romantic books are accessible online. There are also sites where one could download the pdf files without any payment. As a result, people usually prefer the internal to read just to avoid payments. The case of newspapers is also very similar as that of the books. So many sites are available that provides news updates and ongoing current affairs. Different newspapers made it easier for people to choose the kind of reading they like. Some wishes to read a simpler language to understand so they can choose the Hindustan times. There are times when someone have no time to shuffle the newspaper so they refer to the online reading during their way to the job or work. Even the headlines which is shown in bold letters could help the reader in reading and understanding. Meanwhile, there are also people who are not comfortable in going through the books or news on the screen of the phone or the laptops. Taking the examples of the senior citizens, they do not use the internet for reading the newspapers or any kind of reading materials because it may decrease the eyesight. So, they choose the old traditional method of reading. Concluding the fact that people choose the most comfortable means of reading according to their own conveniences.
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people
.

There are
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many
advantages of it. One such is availability of any kind of
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books
and daily news updates. In terms of
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books
, variety of genre from horror to adventures to romantic
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books
are accessible online. There are
also
sites where one could download the
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pdf
files without any payment.
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,
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people
usually
prefer the internal to read
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to avoid payments.

The case of
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newspapers
is
also
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similar as that of the
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books
.
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So
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many
sites are available that provides news updates and ongoing
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current
affairs.
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Different
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newspapers
made it easier for
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people
to
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choose
the kind of
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reading
they like.
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Some
wishes to read a simpler language to understand
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so
they can
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choose
the Hindustan times. There are times when someone
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have
no time to shuffle the
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newspaper
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so
they refer to the online
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reading
during their way to the job or work. Even the headlines which
is shown
in bold letters could
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help
the reader in
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reading
and understanding.

Meanwhile, there are
also
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people
who are not comfortable in going through the
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books
or news on the screen of the phone or the laptops. Taking the examples of the senior citizens, they do not
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use
the internet for
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reading
the
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newspapers
or any kind of
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reading
materials
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because
it may decrease the eyesight.
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, they
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choose
the
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old
traditional method of reading.

Concluding the fact that
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people
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choose
the most comfortable means of
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reading
according to their
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own
conveniences.
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IELTS essay internet is important and discuss the advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
277 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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