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tell me a colorful thing you just bought

tell me a colorful thing you just bought yDAEg

I’m going to talk about a special necklace which is the most colorful thing that I just bought from a shop near my house. In fact, the shop I went to was a wonderful place for jewelry lovers, where had lots of lovable things and charming gifts. The reason why I made up my mind to buy that necklace is it remind me of some recollections. Actually, I used to have one like that but I lost it when I was playing outside at my school yard. As I have said, it was a unique necklace. It’s a gorgeous design, the pendant showcases astral elements including the moon, star and other planets. The use of both silver and gold tones to the design makes it more dynamic. It’s kinda simple but charming, which is the perfect choice for me when I mix it with my casual outfits. What's more, my mother sad to me that it was truly appropriate for me when she told me to try it on. Also, all my besties revealed to me that they likewise need something like my jewelry. You know, I felt extremely delighted when receiving those feedback and I looked forward to shop that store again with my friends now.

I’m going to talk about a special necklace which is the most colorful thing that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from a shop near my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. In fact, the shop I went to was a wonderful place for jewelry lovers, where had lots of lovable things and charming gifts. The reason why I made up my mind to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 that necklace is it remind me of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 recollections. Actually, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have one like that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I lost it when I was playing outside at my school yard.

As I have said, it was a unique necklace. It’s a gorgeous design, the pendant showcases astral elements including the moon, star and other planets. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of both silver and gold tones to the design This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it more dynamic. It’s kinda simple This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 charming, which is the perfect choice for me when I mix it with my casual outfits.

What's more, my mother sad to me that it was truly
 appropriate for me when she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me to try it on. Also
, all my besties revealed to me that they likewise
 need something like my jewelry. You know, I felt extremely
 delighted when receiving Did you mean "this feedback" or "those feedbacks"?this feedbackthose feedbacks
those feedback
 and I looked forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to shopping".to shopping
to shop
 that store again with my friends This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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