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tell about your dream job in the future

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Today I will tell you about my dream job for the future. My dream job would be to be a programmer. It's a pretty popular profession in recent years, in the era of modernization. A programmer is a person who creates softwares and programs on computers and phones. This is a difficult job, this job requires the worker to have a good memory, logical thinking and good ability. However, programmer is a job that many people love, because it is unique and the salary is quite high. I like this job not only because of its salary but also because I like working with computers, creating useful software. I am young, my future is still long, I will try to achieve what I want. Thanks for your listening!
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IELTS essay tell about your dream job in the future

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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