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How does nature impact our wellbeing?

How does nature impact our wellbeing? PRJDB
The natural environment is probably the most important resource around us as it pretty much protects and governs our lives by providing us with whatever we need to survive. It provides us with food, water, oxygen, power, energy, and many, many other things. It also helps us to live a healthy life by clearing the pollution of our atmosphere. Currently, we face a lot of concerns surrounding the depletion of our natural resources due to human activities. Some examples are the depletion of freshwater from sources such as rivers and lakes, degradation of soil and trees, and a dramatic increase in pollution in the air. The largest concern, however, is climate change because it will cause a reduction in food production which will cause a reduction in our animal population which will eventually lead to further human life. It is our responsibility to preserve this precious resource that makes us live. We have been using up the resources for many years now causing an imbalance that has been affecting us already but hasn't been able to notice yet.
The natural environment is
probably
the most
important
resource
around us as it pretty much protects and governs our
lives
by providing us with whatever we need to survive. It provides us with food, water, oxygen, power, energy, and
many
,
many
other things. It
also
helps
us to
live
a healthy life by clearing the pollution of our atmosphere.
Currently
, we face
a lot of
concerns surrounding the depletion of our natural resources due to human activities.
Some
examples are the depletion of freshwater from sources such as rivers and lakes, degradation of soil and trees, and a dramatic increase in pollution in the air. The largest concern,
however
, is climate
change
because
it will cause a reduction in food production which will cause a reduction in our animal population which will
eventually
lead to
further
human life.

It is our responsibility to preserve this precious
resource
that
makes
us
live
. We have been using up the resources for
many
years
now
causing an imbalance that has been affecting us already
but
hasn't been able to notice
yet
.
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IELTS essay How does nature impact our wellbeing?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
178 words
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5.0
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