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tell about the Staying single

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But in my opinion, marriage is the way to create a family, a cell of society. Family will create connection, increase responsibility and love between people. Besides, it also helps to maintain the race, provide labor force for society and promote development. If you are afraid to get married, it may reduce the labor force that contributes to the development of society. Some young people are not married but choose to have children and raise children alone, this problem will more or less affect the development of the child when the child does not receive love, full parenting methods. enough for both parents and their families.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 in my opinion, marriage is the way to create a family, a cell of society. Family will create connection, increase responsibility and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 between This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Besides
, it also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to maintain the race, provide labor force for society and promote development. If you are afraid to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 married, it may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the labor force that contributes to the development of society. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are not married This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 choose to have children and raise children alone, this problem will more or less affect the development of the child when the child does not receive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, full parenting methods. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterEnough
enough
 for both parents and their families. 