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Describe your home town (Hãy tả về quê hương của bạn) You should say: Describe the place What is special about it? Compare it to other cities?

Describe your home town (Hãy tả về quê hương của bạn) You should say: Describe the place What is special about it? Compare it to other cities? JYgwB
Referring to Dong Thap, visitors will immediately think of the vast lotus fields emitting fragrant aroma and peaceful, poetic scenery that few places can compare. With a system of interlaced canals and dense rivers, it has created a multi-ecological region with abundant products, rich food and food sources. Not only bringing impressive tours, but "pink lotus land" Dong Thap also attracts visitors with rustic but delicious local specialties. Please introduce the specialties of Dong Thap you must try when coming here.
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of the vast lotus fields emitting fragrant aroma and peaceful, poetic scenery that few places can compare. With a system of interlaced canals and dense rivers, it has created a multi-ecological region with abundant products, rich food and food sources. Not
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delicious local specialties.
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IELTS essay Describe your home town (Hãy tả về quê hương của bạn) You should say: Describe the place What is special about it? Compare it to other cities?

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1 paragraphs
81 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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