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Describe your home town (Hãy tả về quê hương của bạn) You should say: Describe the place What is special about it? Compare it to other cities?

Describe your home town (Hãy tả về quê hương của bạn) You should say: Describe the place What is special about it? Compare it to other cities? JYgwB

Referring to Dong Thap, visitors will immediately think of the vast lotus fields emitting fragrant aroma and peaceful, poetic scenery that few places can compare. With a system of interlaced canals and dense rivers, it has created a multi-ecological region with abundant products, rich food and food sources. Not only bringing impressive tours, but "pink lotus land" Dong Thap also attracts visitors with rustic but delicious local specialties. Please introduce the specialties of Dong Thap you must try when coming here.

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IELTS essay Describe your home town (Hãy tả về quê hương của bạn) You should say: Describe the place What is special about it? Compare it to other cities?

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American English

1 paragraphs

81 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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