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The short story tells you about members of Meadows’s family

The short story tells you about members of Meadows’s family GJKw2
The short story tells you about members of Meadows’s family. They lived and were happy in an antique stone house which was built in 1673. This special thing is all members of the family who had been born and breathed ones’ last. The master of the house was Mrs. Meadows, She was a woman of seventy, upstanding, aristocratic but she had humour. One day, Mr. George Meadows - the older brother of husband’s Meadows came back home from China after 50 years left. More years ago, Uncle George Meadows and his younger brother, Tom, had both courted Mrs. Meadows, and when she got married Tom, George had gone away. He moved to a lot of places in China and knew something like the back his hand. It appeared that for the last ten years George Meadows, crippled with rheumatism, feeling that he had not much longer to live, wanted to see once more the house in which he was born. He walked by himself to the house. He talked with members of family and he was really satisfied with his life and his choices. He passed a way in this ancient house with all of loving from his family. Mrs. Meadows also was happy when George came back home and she was not sure about her choice. Mr George still kept in mind his promise that he’d never marry anyone but Emily.
The short story
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you about members of Meadows’s
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family
. They
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lived
and were happy in an antique stone
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house
which
was built
in 1673. This special thing is all members of the
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family
who had
been born
and breathed ones’ last. The master of the
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house
was
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Mrs
.
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Meadows
, She was a woman of seventy, upstanding, aristocratic
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but
she had
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humour
.

One day, Mr. George
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Meadows
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-
the older brother of husband’s
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Meadows
came back home from China after 50 years
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left
. More years ago, Uncle George
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Meadows
and his younger brother, Tom, had both courted
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Mrs
.
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Meadows
, and when she
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got
married Tom, George had gone away. He
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moved
to
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a lot of
places in China and knew something like the back his hand. It appeared that for the last ten years George
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Meadows
, crippled with rheumatism, feeling that he had not much longer to
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live
, wanted to
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see
once more the
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house
in which he
was born
. He walked by himself to the
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house
. He talked with members of
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family and
he was
really
satisfied with his life and his choices.

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He
passed a way in this ancient
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house
with
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all of loving
from his
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family
.
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Mrs
.
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Meadows
also
was happy when George came back
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home and
she was not sure about her choice. Mr George
still
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kept
in mind his promise that he’d never marry anyone
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but
Emily.
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IELTS essay The short story tells you about members of Meadows’s family

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
232 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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