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Television is the most important means of learning new things. Do you agree or disagree?

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Mass media have been considered to be the most essential invention which humankind has ever achieved. In the global village of today the need for them is increasing day by day. Therefore, in the last few decades the argument that television is a main resource to inform new things or not has provoked many debates among population. It is agreed with the idea that television is the most crucial aspects to learning new things. This will be illustrated by analysing that television is key part for learning subject as well as we are informed about the latest news by watching television. To begin with, there are many chanals of television that depending on improving knowledge. This point is aptly illustrated by the example pupil who could not participate the lesson at school learn her subject completely from the channels on television. Even though practical subjects are teached more understandably than lesson at school. It is commonly understood that television provide with education widely. Thus the argument that television's role is necessary to give new information can be supported. Secondly, it is known that influence of television can be seen in young viewer's behaviour. This causes that good and bad things are learned on television. For instance, European scientists mention that 90 per cent today'people's behaviour is reflected their watching programmes. It is clearly be seen nowadays many people are learning more about moral and mental things than other matter. Therefore, thus the hightened correctness of this opinion that television is key part of learning new things can clearly be seen. To sum up, after analysing these view points the idea that the television is essential for learning new things can be strong supported. It is hoped that the role of television will not change in our life.
Mass media have
been considered
to be the most essential invention which humankind has ever achieved. In the global village of
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today
the need for them is increasing day by day.
Therefore
, in the last few decades the argument that
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television
is a main resource to inform
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new
things or not has provoked
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many
debates among population. It is
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agreed
with the
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idea
that
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television
is the most crucial aspects to
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learning
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new
things. This will
be illustrated
by
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analysing
that
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television
is key part for
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learning
subject
as well
as we
are informed
about the latest
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news
by watching
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television
. To
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begin
with, there are
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many
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chanals
of
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television
that depending on improving knowledge. This point is
aptly
illustrated by the example pupil who could not participate the lesson at school learn her subject completely from the channels on
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television
.
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Even though
practical subjects are
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teached
more
understandably
than lesson at school. It is
commonly
understood that
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television
provide with education
widely
.
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Thus
the argument that television's role is necessary to give
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new
information can
be supported
.
Secondly
, it
is known
that influence of
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television
can be
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seen
in young viewer's
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behaviour
. This causes that
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good
and
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bad
things
are learned
on
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television
.
For instance
, European scientists mention that 90 per cent
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today
'
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people
's
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behaviour
is reflected
their watching
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programmes
. It is
clearly
be
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seen
nowadays
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many
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people
are
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learning
more about moral and mental things than other matter.
Therefore
,
thus
the
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hightened
correctness of this opinion that
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television
is key part of
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learning
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new
things can
clearly
be
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seen
. To sum up, after
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analysing
these view points the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that the
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television
is essential for
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learning
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new
things can be strong supported. It
is hoped
that the role of
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television
will not
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change
in our life.
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IELTS essay Television is the most important means of learning new things.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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