Television is one of the most widely used modern technologies in this time. Television is a great source of information and entertainment. There are many programs and lots of channels that people can view and choose from. Some of the programs that televisions provide have both good and bad impacts.
To begin, television shows many film programs and also news that really are interesting to watch. It gives information which is mostly up to date, so we will know about the new information. With many learning programs, children can learn more about anything or probably know about another country although they have never gone there.
In addition, the advertisement in television program can help some of the housewives to improve their knowledge about cooking, housekeeping, gardening, travel etc. Because of that for a housewife who loves cooking sometimes they can learn through watching television programmes.
Furthermore, besides good information and other valuable information and entertainment that the television provides us, it could be a terrible problem to some people as well. For example, someone who really likes watching TV sometimes does not feel satisfied with their lives, because they want to be an actress or actor in TV, this condition shows that they are addicted to television. Also for children, they will have a low concentration with their subject in school. Many people get addicted watching TV and that is harmful to them. The news presented on a TV is not always fair and many of the biased news can cause great chaos among people.
In conclusion, television is an important technology for every people today. Because it provides much information that really improves our knowledge. We can know anything about this world without even visiting there. But we must manage our time to watch TV and prudently schedule out the timing for TV. Parents must be cautious and take more control of their children’s TV schedule.
Television
is one of the most
widely
used
modern technologies in this time.
Television
is a great source of
information
and entertainment. There are
many
programs
and lots of channels that
people
can view and choose from.
Some of the
programs
that
televisions
provide have both
good
and
bad
impacts.
To
begin
,
television
shows
many
film
programs
and
also
news
that
really
are interesting to
watch
. It gives
information
which is
mostly
up to date,
so
we will know about the
new
information
. With
many
learning
programs
, children can learn more about anything or
probably
know about another country although they have never gone there.
In addition
, the advertisement in
television
program
can
help
some of the
housewives to
improve
their knowledge about cooking, housekeeping, gardening, travel etc.
Because
of that for a housewife who
loves
cooking
sometimes
they can learn through watching
television
programmes
.
Furthermore
,
besides
good
information
and other valuable
information
and entertainment that the
television
provides us, it could be a terrible problem to
some
people
as well
.
For example
, someone who
really
likes watching TV
sometimes
does not feel satisfied with their
lives
,
because
they want to be an actress or actor in TV, this condition
shows
that they
are addicted
to
television
.
Also
for children, they will have a low concentration with their subject in school.
Many
people
get
addicted watching TV and
that is
harmful to them. The
news
presented on a TV is not always
fair
and
many
of the biased
news
can cause great chaos among
people
.
In conclusion
,
television
is an
important
technology for every
people
today
.
Because
it provides much
information
that
really
improves
our knowledge. We can know anything about this world without even visiting there.
But
we
must
manage our time to
watch
TV and
prudently
schedule out the timing for TV. Parents
must
be cautious and take more control of their children’s TV schedule.
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