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best city in the world to live in and to visit

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The island nation of Singapore is one of the best cities in the world to live in and to visit. Firstly, Singapore is a safe country. It has a very low crime rate. At night, people can walk the streets without fear. Also, Singapore is very clean. The nation has very strong antilittering laws, so there is almost no litter anywhere. Lastly, people in Singapore come from many different areas but they live together in peace. in conclusion, Singapore is the best city in the world to live in and to visit.
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, Singapore is a safe country. It has a
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low crime rate. At night,
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can walk the streets without fear.
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, Singapore is
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clean. The nation has
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there is almost no litter anywhere.
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in Singapore
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conclusion, Singapore is the best city in the world to
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IELTS essay best city in the world to live in and to visit

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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