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Teenagers are the crucial part of life. They have faced lots of problems. Write down causes behind this phenomenon

Teenagers are the crucial part of life. They have faced lots of problems. Write down causes behind this phenomenon Og1Pd
Teenagers years are the most valuable period of life. These are beautiful years but they have their own problems and difficulties. This essay will discuss difficulties and suggest some measures. Teenagers face lots of problems at home. Such as guardian pressures, teenage probably hormonal changes their body part and mind set up. They discovere their own introvert world. In school teenagers are not without problems. There are several types of pressures that they have faced. For example, they face too much study pressure, and lots of extra tutions also. Some teachers criticise badly teenagers. When they know it they get depressed. Last but not least, peer pressure at school. Teenagers take drugs under peer pressure. Parents and teachers ought to treat like friends. And give time to their children. Parents never behave rudely with them. Parents should take care them. If they keep waiting things may go out of their hands. To conclude, teenagers is an important stage of life. They have faced lots of problems. Parents and school authorities should do them best. Then teenagers will shine in their life.
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Teenagers
years are the most valuable period of life. These are
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beautiful
years
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they have their
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own
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problems
and difficulties. This essay will discuss difficulties and suggest
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some
measures.

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Teenagers
face lots of
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problems
at home. Such as guardian
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pressures
, teenage
probably
hormonal
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changes
their body part and mind set up. They
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discovere
their
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own
introvert world.

In school
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teenagers
are not without
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problems
. There are several types of
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pressures
that they have faced.

For example
, they face too much study
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pressure
, and lots of extra
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tutions
also
.
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Some
teachers
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criticise
badly
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teenagers
.
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When
they know it they
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get
depressed. Last
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but
not least, peer
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pressure
at school.
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Teenagers
take drugs under peer pressure.

Parents and teachers ought to treat like friends. And give time to their children. Parents never behave
rudely
with them. Parents should take care them.
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If
they
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keep
waiting things may go out of their hands.

To conclude
,
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teenagers
is an
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important
stage of life. They have faced lots of
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problems
. Parents and school authorities should do them best. Then
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teenagers
will shine in their life.

IELTS essay Teenagers are the crucial part of life. They have faced lots of problems. Write down causes behind this phenomenon

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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