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SHOULD GOVERNMENTS CENSOR THE INTERNET FOR THE WELFARE OF STUDENTS AND CITIZENS?

SHOULD GOVERNMENTS CENSOR THE INTERNET FOR THE WELFARE OF STUDENTS AND CITIZENS? 11j5N

It is an undeniable to urge that internet is proved to be a boon in today’s technological world until and unless it is used in an appropriate way. However, teenagers and residents are using it abundantly still many times they step out from their path and visit some futile sites. Hence, it should restricted by the authorities. Points supported with it are elucidated in the below paragraphs. To initiate with, students are considered to be the future for any successful country. Moreover, it is inevitable for them to involve themselves in sites or games which relate to education rather than visiting entry filter sites. To showcase an example, game-like bluewhale is proved to be detrimental to them. In addition to this, parents should also keep an eye on their activities if not done so then it will be a hard nut to crack for them in the future. To commence with regards to citizens, there are innumerable links that promote duplication of any content. Additionally, some businessmen are found to be victims of hacking their data which is inimical for the throttle of their business. For instance, sites like the darknet operated by hackers. I like to deem that, utilitarian of web surfing is paramount in this rivalry life; nonetheless, it should not affect anyone’s life. Ergo, ruling parties have kept many sites in a red box. To illustrate, apps that contain pornography and TikTok. To conclude, Government should come with a redeye and censor it so that parents and companies related to this obey it by the book and the country can be saved from this obnoxious situation.

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 to be a boon in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
’s technological world until and unless it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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in an appropriate way
. However
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teenagers
 and residents are using it abundantly
still
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many
 times they step out from their path and visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 futile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
. Hence
, it should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "restrict"restrict
restricted
 by the authorities. Points supported with it are elucidated
 in the below paragraphs.

To initiate with, students are considered
 to be the future for any successful country. Moreover
, it is inevitable for them to involve themselves in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 or games which relate to education rather
 than visiting entry filter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
. To showcase an example, game-like Possible spelling mistake found.blue whale
bluewhale
is proved
 to be detrimental to them. In addition
 to this, parents should also
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keep
 an eye on their activities if not done This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 then it will be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 nut to crack for them in the future.

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with regards to
 citizens, there are innumerable links that promote duplication of any content. Additionally
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 businessmen are found
 to be victims of hacking their data which is inimical for the throttle of their business. For instance
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 like the Possible spelling mistake found.dark net
darknet
 operated by hackers.

I like to deem that, utilitarian of web surfing is paramount in this rivalry life; nonetheless, it should not affect anyone’s life. Ergo, ruling parties have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectionspotscenestationlocationhome
sites
 in a red box. To illustrate, apps that contain pornography and TikTok.

To conclude
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with a Possible spelling mistake found.redyered eye
redeye
 and censor it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that parents and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 related to this obey it by the book and the country can be saved
 from this obnoxious situation. 