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I read your advertisement in the online newspaper and it immediately caught my attention.

I read your advertisement in the online newspaper and it immediately caught my attention. Pr6gd
I read your advertisement in the online newspaper and it immediately caught my attention. Currently, I am looking for a good job and I would only like to clarify a few details. Firstly, what is the maximum age? Car accidents are frequent in our town. Therefore, I am interested, what kind of insurance (car or health) do you provide? And finally, I want to visit your company to talk about the work personally and could you tell me the exact location?
I read your advertisement in the online newspaper and it immediately caught my attention.
Currently
, I am looking for a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
job and I would
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only
like to clarify a few
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
.
Firstly
, what is the maximum age? Car accidents are frequent in our town.
Therefore
, I
am interested
, what kind of insurance (car or health) do you provide? And
finally
, I want to visit your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
to talk about the work
personally
and could you
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tell
me the exact location?
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IELTS essay I read your advertisement in the online newspaper and it immediately caught my attention.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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