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The survey was performed from September 29 to October 7, 2021. The questionnaire was filled out online by 60 students who enrolled in various grades at the International School of Business. They are all Vietnamese and currently living in Vietnam. The sample was randomly selected. Female students under the age of 20 made up the majority, accounting for 57% of the total. The instrument of the survey was in the form of a questionnaire utilizing Google forms. EAP4-0921-WSB6 students formulate 13 questions which were all closed-ended. The first two questions elicited the respondent’s demographic information, specifically about gender and age

The survey was performed
 from September 29 to October 7, 2021. The questionnaire was filled
 out online by 60 students who enrolled in various grades at the International School of Business. They are all Vietnamese and currently
 living in Vietnam. The sample was randomly
 selected. Female students under the age of 20 made up the majority, accounting for 57% of the total.

The instrument of the survey was in the form of a questionnaire utilizing Google forms.

EAP4-0921-WSB6 students formulate 13 questions which were all closed-ended. The first
 two questions elicited the respondent’s demographic information, specifically
 about gender and Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphage.age!age?age:age,age;
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IELTS essay teenager and social media

Essay

American English

3 paragraphs

99 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 7.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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