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techonology makes online shopping easier. But many people disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Modern technology has made online shopping today easier, discuss both views and yours The combination of high-speed internet and technology has made shopping nowadays more convenient and effiencient. Yet many people argue if its advantages would over shadow the potential risks and disadvantages of online shopping. In my opnion, the future market belongs to those that could make full use of virtual purchase, digital platforms and e-commerce. Shopping through online websites and e-commerce websites helps people save time and effort as everything can be delivered online, including giant furniture and fragile electronic devices. In the past, a wife might have to spent a few hours for daily groceries, and it would be complicated if they forgot anything in the shopping list. This rarely happens in the modern society when they could easily order food online and have it delivered to their front door. And if they miss the spices, they can have it in a click. Thanks to the new way of purchasing, many families and couples could have more time to enjoy themselves instead of stressing over tedious housechores. On the orther hand, people may easily leak their confidential information such as banking account and OTP code if they are reckless when shopping online, especially elderly as they are not used to new ways of shopping. This causes unpredictable harms as criminals may not only steal the savings in their bank but also fake their social insurance, and identities to commit other crimes. Furthermore, many people are dissatisfied with the quality of the goods shipped to them since companies tend to upload glamourous images of products to catch customers’ attention. For many, it is better to go to the stores and use senses to check the products to avoid future regrets. In conclusion, technology has brought us many advantages.
Modern technology has made
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shopping
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today
easier, discuss both views and yours

The combination of high-speed internet and technology has made
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shopping
nowadays more convenient and
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effiencient
.
Yet
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many
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people
argue if its advantages would over shadow the potential
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risks
and disadvantages of
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online
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shopping
. In my
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opnion
, the future market belongs to those that could
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make
full
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use
of virtual
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purchase
, digital platforms and e-commerce.

Shopping through
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online
websites and e-commerce websites
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helps
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people
save time and effort as everything can
be delivered
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online
, including giant furniture and fragile electronic devices. In the past, a wife might have
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to spent
a few hours for daily groceries, and it would
be complicated
if they forgot anything in the
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shopping
list. This rarely happens in the modern society when they could
easily
order food
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online
and have it delivered to their front door. And if they miss the spices, they can have it in a click. Thanks to the new way of purchasing,
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many
families and couples could have more time to enjoy themselves
instead
of stressing over tedious
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housechores
.

On the
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orther
hand,
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people
may
easily
leak their confidential information such as banking account and OTP code if they are reckless when
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shopping
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online
,
especially
elderly as they are not
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used
to new ways of
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shopping
. This causes unpredictable harms as criminals may not
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only
steal the savings in their bank
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but
also
fake their social insurance, and identities to commit other crimes.
Furthermore
,
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many
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people
are dissatisfied
with the quality of the
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goods
shipped to them since
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companies
tend to upload
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glamourous
images of products to catch customers’ attention. For
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many
, it is better to go to the stores and
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use
senses to
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check
the products to avoid future regrets.

In conclusion
, technology has brought us
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many
advantages.
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IELTS essay techonology makes online shopping easier. But many people disagree.

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300 words
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