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8. Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this method.

8. Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this method. awoRG
There is an increase in the number of institutes and businesses using the online meeting method recently. Despite having some controversy, learning online has its pros and cons. Nowadays, especially in the current pandemic situation, technology plays an important role in education and working. Because of social distancing policies, the online meeting is the most convenient working method to keep our health leading to reducing in the number of covid cases. Another benefit of the online class is that it can save our time and cost for traveling to the study and working spaces, especially with busy people. Furthermore, with many current digital devices, online courses can be recorded meaning that we can save and rewatch them as needed, for instance, students can revise lessons to prepare for their exams or some people can playback them if they miss some parts of the video. On the other hand, online education has some drawbacks relating to device connection, interaction, and teacher observation. The Online meeting can be disrupted due to many technical glitches such as internet congestion, power cut…which can influence the timeline and the content of the meeting. Moreover, when learning in conventional class, students can get a better chance to interact with their teacher and their peers, as a result, students can grasp the course more efficiently and have an ideal occasion to discuss and work in a team with each other. Also, it is hard for teachers to monitor all their students’ progress to make sure they are focusing on the lesson, in fact, several students can sleep and do their own works without teacher detection during the lesson. All in all, the online meeting allows students to study from anywhere and at any time, it is also cost-effective and suitable with the current pandemic situation. However, it has several disadvantages about technical connection, the lacking of interaction, and teacher’s observation.
There is an increase in the number of institutes and businesses using the
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online
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meeting
method recently. Despite having
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some
controversy, learning
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online
has its pros and cons.

Nowadays,
especially
in the
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current
pandemic situation, technology plays an
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important
role in education and working.
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Because
of social distancing policies, the
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online
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meeting
is the most convenient working method to
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keep
our health leading to reducing in the number of
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covid
cases. Another benefit of the
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online
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class
is that it can save our time and cost for traveling to the study and working spaces,
especially
with busy
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people
.
Furthermore
, with
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many
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current
digital devices,
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online
courses can
be recorded
meaning that we can save and
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rewatch
them as needed,
for instance
,
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students
can revise lessons to prepare for their exams or
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some
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people
can playback them if they miss
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some
parts of the video.

On the other hand
,
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education has
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some
drawbacks relating to device connection, interaction, and
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teacher
observation. The
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Online
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meeting
can
be disrupted
due to
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many
technical glitches such as internet congestion, power
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cut
…which can influence the timeline and the content of the
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meeting
.
Moreover
, when learning in conventional
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class
,
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students
can
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get
a better chance to interact with their
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teacher
and their peers,
as a result
,
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students
can grasp the course more
efficiently
and have an ideal occasion to discuss and work in a team with each other.
Also
, it is
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hard
for
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teachers
to monitor all their
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students’
progress to
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make
sure they are focusing on the lesson, in fact, several
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students
can sleep and do their
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own
works without
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teacher
detection during the lesson.

All in all, the
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meeting
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allows
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students
to study from anywhere and at any time, it is
also
cost-effective and suitable with the
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current
pandemic situation.
However
, it has several disadvantages about technical connection, the lacking of interaction, and
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teacher’s
observation.
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IELTS essay 8. Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this method.

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